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托福写作十大典型失败案例分析(二)

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典型失败案例四:观点模糊态度暧昧

 

Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

  

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me…… 

  

典型失败案例五:语法错误惨不忍睹

 

Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

  

About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parents responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should

    

典型失败案例六:过分简单没有重点Topic-The importance of environmental protection

  

This issue is surely very important, lets talk about it!

  

典型失败案例七:用词不当 表达不准

 

Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

  

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we cant take the responsibility to form a family

  


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