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托福写作考试中学会审题的重要性(一)

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    托福写作考试的第一步,就是审题。但是这也是考生在备考的时候容易忽略的问题,大家往往只注重于如何写漂亮的句子和使用高级的词汇。所以这也是很多考生的英语水平不错,却只能得一个一般的分数的原因。

 

那么,我们在备考中到底要如何备考呢?下面我们为大家整理了一些建议,希望对大家的备考有所帮助。

 

  例1

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Colleges and universities should offer more preparation for student before they start working.

 

看到这个题目,很多同学会可能会这样写:

Agree.

1. Students should take more specialized courses(专业课)in order to be knowledgeable and skillful enough for their future careers(接着开始论述being knowledgeable and skillful的重要性);

2.Participating in internships helps students to have a clearer picture of their vocational development in the future(接着开始论述,如果没有实过习,在工作的时候是多么地feel so unprepared);

3. Attending more club activities is an effective way to improve social skills, which are crucial for success both in life and at work(接着开始论述good social skills对职业和生活的帮助).

 

如果不看括号里的内容,仅看主题句,这篇文章是没有任何问题的。然而,括号中的论述从严格意义上来讲,是不能支持"more"这个关键词的。

 

举个简单的例子:"我们需要钱""我们需要更多钱"在证明的时候重点是不一样的。如果证明"我们需要钱",应该详细阐述钱的"不可或缺性",比如生活、学习、教育都需要钱;但是如果证明"我们需要更多钱",重点则应该放在"钱不够"的论述上,证明在学习、生活、教育方面的预算都很紧张。

 

同样地,上面的题目中仅仅证明Knowledge for careers, field experience and social skills are important是不够的,事实上,这些根本不需要证明,需要证明的事情是graduates today are not well prepared in the three aspects.

 

因此这篇文章应该是一篇"抱怨型"的文章,详细地去论述学校工作的不足。参考思路如下:

Agree.

1. Many students today complain that they cannot learn practical skills and up-to-date information, for some of their teachers are not qualified enough to teach specialized courses;

2. Since many students are not allowed enough time to participate in internship programs before graduation, they know very little about what their future jobs like;

3. Joining clubs is possible for every college student, yet not every club provide is capable of offering enough opportunities for students to practice their social skills.


延伸阅读:

托福写作的两种出题形式分析

托福独立写作评分细则与机经使用

托福独立写作观点选择的准则


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